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So I decided to do a speed animation, this took about 2 hours and unfortunately it's just outlined, it would've been awesome to shade it but tedious as well.
This came out of the thought that since I've seen a couple of animation students do stuff with a flour bag and since I'm teaching myself... why not try it? I tried out a few techniques (principles) in there: squash and stretch, anticipation, timing, etc. and I'd be very happy if I had some critique so I can improve my frame by frame skills. Don't judge art quality, not only because it was a speedy work but because I'm working on sketchiness too, I have to learn to draw faster.
So I decided to do a speed animation, this took about 2 hours and unfortunately it's just outlined, it would've been awesome to shade it but tedious as well.
This came out of the thought that since I've seen a couple of animation students do stuff with a flour bag and since I'm teaching myself... why not try it? I tried out a few techniques (principles) in there: squash and stretch, anticipation, timing, etc. and I'd be very happy if I had some critique so I can improve my frame by frame skills. Don't judge art quality, not only because it was a speedy work but because I'm working on sketchiness too, I have to learn to draw faster.
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For me it isn't so much the number of frames as it is the timing of them. I'm agreeing with JoyAffliction on that part, as well as making sure the volume of the sack stays consistent.
I can see where you started using the other principles too, and you're off to a good start. But if you really want to study them, I'd take more time with my studies and ask myself, "Does that look real?" The Principles of Animation are a bitch to master, but once you have them down it'll make things a lot easier. Keep it up! :'D
I can see where you started using the other principles too, and you're off to a good start. But if you really want to study them, I'd take more time with my studies and ask myself, "Does that look real?" The Principles of Animation are a bitch to master, but once you have them down it'll make things a lot easier. Keep it up! :'D